Essays That Talk

Crafting the college admissions essay.

My goal is simple: to guide you through a reflective writing process that brings clarity to your character and values. The final product? An inspired essay that captivates the reader with emotional imagery and an invitation into your story.

As a former journalist and teacher, I have the ability to put you at ease as we discover your narrative.

My background in brand strategy, news writing, and editing has provided me with the skill set to help students find their voices and tell their stories.

What are some elements of a strong essay?

Self-Awareness

What is your personal learning style? What motivates you? How do you respond to challenges? Demonstrating an understanding of one’s personal development is a sign of maturity and college readiness. 

Authenticity

It’s essential to present your true self in your essay, in your own voice. Simply put, write like you speak and get personal. Captivate your reader with colorful details, perhaps a sense of humor, and a measure of risk. 

Inspiration

Colleges want to learn your take on the world, where your curiosities lie, and how you will contribute to their community. Consider a seemingly small moment that took on big meaning, be inventive, and have confidence in yourself and your words.

Show, Don't Tell

To quote Mark Twain, “when you see an adjective, kill it.” The point? Share your story through sensory detail and action, inviting the reader in with emotional imagery that evokes a reaction.

"Susan provided me with the tools to add authenticity and personalization to my writing. Her comments were constructive, supportive, and honest. I can’t recommend Susan enough.”

— Student

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“Susan helped my son come up with a personal statement that really spoke to his strength of character. They worked through different styles to convey his ideas in an engaging way, and Susan supported him through multiple drafts with constructive comments that pushed his thinking and writing."

— Parent